Palliation in chronic illness paper

Palliation in chronic illness. In E. Chang & A. Johnson (Eds.), Chronic illness and disability. Principles for nursing practice (2nd ed.). (pp. 232-248). Chatswood: Elsevier.

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– Bhatnagar, S,. & Joshi, S. (2011). Palliative care in young adults: an issue which needs higher and better awareness. Indian Journal of Palliative Care, 13(3), 173-174. doi:10.4103/0973-1075.92332

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* The essay should have intext citation for most sentences in APA style

* The essay should be written in Times New Roman with font size 12.
Given below is the things to be changed for my essay. This is the feedback from my teacher.

*The introduction is too long and does not clearly introduce what is to be covered in the essay.
*Paragraphs need a topic sentence for each that relates to the question. Many paragraphs contain a lot of material that is not clearly linked to the topic sentence of the paragraph.
*Ensure that you answer the two aspects of the question.
*Please use the correct term – “older adult” rather than old adult.
*Some lack of clarity of written expression evident; there is a need to develop clear, concise arguments that answer the question.
*Arguments regarding the nursing care using a palliative care approach needs strengthening.
*You need to review what you have written with reference to the question.
*Please review the marking criteria.

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